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Exile

yeah i wrote this poem along time ago..... i just found it....its sad like the rest....here it is

Exile
By Seth Aaron Miller

left here to rot
left here to die
sent into exile
not expecting much
just searching for a life
searching for my soul
left out of the light
lying in the darkness
dispair
hellish dreams
its a never ending fall into a pit of fire
sitting in the shadows weeping
feeling my skin creeping
with no sleep
i feel nothing
just coldness on my neck
no stopping myself now
just contuing to fall
death
night
pain
i wait for you to come
with my eyes sown closed
and my mouth full of blood
the last bit of pain shoots out of my black heart
or at least what is left of it
it smothers all hope inside of me
making it seem like my mind is breaking
suddenly i cant breath
i still find myself longing for you
pain
guilt
torment
shattered dreams
falling faster now
darkness
dagger
suicide
bleeding
here in exile....
all alone i now die
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thats a really amazing poem. Great job:).
thanks....i try to put a lot of emotion in my poems.....and plus....i really like your icon...its hott
Damon
No problem. It was really evident all the emotion you put in, I think thats what made it so good, and I can really relate to it.

i really like your icon...its hott thanks :), I love ur icon too.
LoL sry about sending that last comment so many times. the livejournal thing screwed up.