Brittany (brytne69) wrote in emotions_inside,

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Alone -{ or something like it}-

Alone in the darkness by myself, no one knows how i feel.
So hard now, to put on my fake smile.
i crack under pressure, just like old porcline tile.
go away, now leave me be.
I hate you, and u hate me

its not as good as the first but hey. BE HONEST AND TELL ME WUT YA THINK!
\m/ rock on \m/ Brittany
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i thought it was good.......but it was just a little short....but who said poems have to be was a good poem you should write more
thanx. i wrote one b4 the thru another eyes one. but i changed my name